The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
The map shows
Norbiton
in this
day and the future transition for develope
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developing
this
city
.
Overall
, Norbiton
has the
huge change from Correct article usage
a
industrial
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an industrial
town
to area
for living. Correct article usage
an area
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, all Correct your spelling
Significantly
factory
in the Fix the agreement mistake
factories
city
ture
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turn
in to
housing and facility Join the words
into
place
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places
Norbiton
also
expands the town
to another side of the river for the development of the city
. Finally
, Norbiton
add
more Wrong verb form
added
roundabout
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roundabouts
for
reduce the chaos that will happen from the development of the Change preposition
to
city
.
To conclude
the transition, Norbiton
will develope
in every Correct your spelling
develop
elements
in the Change to a singular noun
element
town
: chaging
the function of the Correct your spelling
changing
city
from industrial
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an industrial
town
to rasidential
, road map and more roundabout. All Correct your spelling
residential
this
make
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makes
Norbiton
will develop from now.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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