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The graph below shows the number of car manufactured from 2020 to 2035.

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The graph below shows the number of car manufactured from 2020 to 2035.
The line chart indicates the
number
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 of
cars
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 manufactured
from
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in
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 China,
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UK
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the UK
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,
Japan
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 and
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USA
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the USA
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 from 2020 to 2035
Overall
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, in the
future
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future,
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 the
number
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 of
cars
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 manufactured in China will be crowned with much love , will experience
increase
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an increase
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in
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apply
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,
it
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and it
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 will dominate
WTO
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the WTO
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.
Whaters
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What's more
,
Japan
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,
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USA
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the USA
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 and
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UK
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the UK
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 will attend tổ saw a notable decline over the period,
specially
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especially
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 the plummet of the skills is about to reach the bottom,
lead
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leading
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 to it to lose thêm position
of
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in
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 the
number
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 of
car
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cars
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 manufactured
Intermof
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In
 the sudden changes
according to
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sharp
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a sharp
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 decrease , it is taking place in
Uk
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,
Japan
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 and
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USA
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the USA
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. The anticipants
reveals
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reveal
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 that there will be a
dramatically
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dramatic
 fall
the
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in the
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number
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 of
cars
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 manufactured in
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USA
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the USA
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, over 5 years, the
rates
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rate
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 of
cars
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was
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will experience a
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 significant drop
around 100 estimated
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, estimated at around 100 million
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number
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 in hundreds of thousands
compared
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, compared
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the
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to the
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 first time. In 2035, it is estimated that
will
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it will
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bottomed
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bottom
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 out only
left
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apply
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5 units. Following
to
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the
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UK
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, the
number
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 of
cars
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 is predicted to go down with
initial
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an initial
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 land mark 200 in2020 until
2035
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2035,
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 it
only
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will only
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 left 15 estimated
number
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 in hundreds of thousands .
Specially
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Specifically
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,
Japan
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 from 350in 2020 to approximately 380 in
2025
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2025,
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then
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10
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over the next 10
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following
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apply
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years
the
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, the
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number
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 of
cars
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 manufactured
expected
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is expected
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 to experience
decline
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a decline
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280
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of 280
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 units compared to
the
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apply
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2025 Regarding
of
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apply
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the
number
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 of
cars
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 manufactured in China , the likelihood shows that there will be a dramatic climb fluctuates at an average level from 100 to 200 estimated
number
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 in hundreds of thousands between 2020 and 2035

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cars, uk, japan, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing output
  • Production trend
  • Significant peak
  • Notable decline
  • Fluctuation
  • Technological advancements
  • Economic challenges
  • Consumer demand
  • Sustainability
  • Government regulation
  • Predictive analysis
  • Market dynamics
  • Environmental impact
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