These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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and

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internet

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the internet

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are very important

now days

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in the way

individuals

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relate socially to

one

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another. I strongly agree with the thought that the

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of

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development

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outweighs

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its

drawbacks

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. The

advantages

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include,

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ability to

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people and

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stores

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data

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and information for

future

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the

drawbacks

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are it discourages physical social connections and

also

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encourages bullying over the

internet

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,

communication

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gadgets and

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internet

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the internet

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has

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helped bring

individuals

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together.

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in turn has positively impacted

communication

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across the globe between

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living far from

one

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another. As an example, a Chinese telecommunication company in 2010 revealed that

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who live far apart have been in constant

communication

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thereby bringing them together despite the distance between them.

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, it has helped in storing

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and information for

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references

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. The ability to store

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in its original form away from destruction has helped in

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storage of

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and

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retrieval. As an illustration, the ITN network company of Japan in 2014 stated that

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created over the

internet

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can be retrieved in its original form even a decade from

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also

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the hard disk space on mobile

phones

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are

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resistant to destruction and can

therefore

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store

data

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for ages and the

data

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can be accessed and retrieved easily. In conclusion,

communication

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gadgets and

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internet

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has

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had a positive impact as

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they

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helps

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help

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connect people over long distances and

it

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apply

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stores

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data

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for

future

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references

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.

On the other hand

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,

this

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development

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has its

drawbacks

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as it encourages

laziness

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among

individuals

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.

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has discouraged physical social connections as

individuals

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preferred to have conversations over the

phones

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instead

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of meeting in person. As an illustration, the catholic church of Nineveh in 2005 discovered that most

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especially the youths did not attend Sunday service as they preferred attending the service on

you tube

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youtube

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for

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they could not go to church as they claimed the service was tiresome and boring

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there were crowds of people which they were avoiding and

this

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encouraged

laziness

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. In the second place,

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has encouraged bullying over the

internet

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. There has been an increase in

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cyber bullying

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cyberbullying

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as there has been easy access to both smartphones and the

internet

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.

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, in 2020 the Kenyan Director of Criminal

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on the contributing factor of

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crimes

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revealed that

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apply

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the increase in the availability of smartphones and the

internet

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has had a great impact on

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crimes

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which included bullying as

one

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of the major

crimes

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. In summary,

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has led to

laziness

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cyber bullying

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cyberbullying

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among

individuals

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. In a nutshell ,in

the

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apply

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recent

days

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individuals

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have related to

one

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another socially by

use

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mobile

phones

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and over the

internet

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which

had

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played a major role in

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development

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.I strongly support the idea that the

advantages

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of

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development

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outweigh its disadvantages. The

advantages

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of

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has included

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connecting

individuals

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who are distances apart and

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it helps protect and store

data

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for

future

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references

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however

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, there are some

drawbacks

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which

includes

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laziness

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and

cyber

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crimes

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.