These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Phones

and

internet

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the internet

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are very important

now days

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nowadays

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in the way

individuals

relate socially to

one

another. I strongly agree with the thought that the

advantages

of

this

development

outweighs

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outweigh

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its

drawbacks

. The

advantages

include,

it's

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its

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ability to

connects

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connect

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people and

also

stores

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store

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data

and information for

future

reference

while

the

drawbacks

are it discourages physical social connections and

also

encourages bullying over the

internet

.

Firstly

,

communication

gadgets and

internet

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the internet

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has

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have

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helped bring

individuals

together.

This

in turn has positively impacted

communication

across the globe between

individuals

living far from

one

another. As an example, a Chinese telecommunication company in 2010 revealed that

individuals

who live far apart have been in constant

communication

thereby bringing them together despite the distance between them.

Secondly

, it has helped in storing

data

and information for

future

references

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reference

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. The ability to store

data

in its original form away from destruction has helped in

simple

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the simple

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storage of

data

and

it's

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its

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retrieval. As an illustration, the ITN network company of Japan in 2014 stated that

data

created over the

internet

can be retrieved in its original form even a decade from

then

also

the hard disk space on mobile

phones

are

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is

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resistant to destruction and can

therefore

store

data

for ages and the

data

can be accessed and retrieved easily. In conclusion,

communication

gadgets and

internet

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the internet

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has

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have

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had a positive impact as

it

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they

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helps

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help

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connect people over long distances and

it

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apply

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stores

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store

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data

for

future

references

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reference

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.

On the other hand

,

this

development

has its

drawbacks

as it encourages

laziness

among

individuals

.

This

has discouraged physical social connections as

individuals

preferred to have conversations over the

phones

instead

of meeting in person. As an illustration, the catholic church of Nineveh in 2005 discovered that most

individuals

especially the youths did not attend Sunday service as they preferred attending the service on

you tube

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youtube

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for

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because

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they could not go to church as they claimed the service was tiresome and boring

also

there were crowds of people which they were avoiding and

this

encouraged

laziness

. In the second place,

this

has encouraged bullying over the

internet

. There has been an increase in

cyber bullying

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cyberbullying

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as there has been easy access to both smartphones and the

internet

.

For example

, in 2020 the Kenyan Director of Criminal

investigation

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on the contributing factor of

cyber

crimes

revealed that

with

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the increase in the availability of smartphones and the

internet

has had a great impact on

cyber

crimes

which included bullying as

one

of the major

crimes

. In summary,

this

has led to

laziness

and

cyber bullying

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cyberbullying

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among

individuals

. In a nutshell ,in

the

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apply

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recent

days

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days,

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individuals

have related to

one

another socially by

use

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using

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mobile

phones

and over the

internet

which

had

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has

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played a major role in

this

development

.I strongly support the idea that the

advantages

of

this

development

outweigh its disadvantages. The

advantages

of

this

has included

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include

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connecting

individuals

who are distances apart and

also

it helps protect and store

data

for

future

references

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reference

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however

, there are some

drawbacks

which

includes

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include

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laziness

and

cyber

crimes

.