The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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student
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enrollment
in Iran , Greece and Turkey over a periodUse synonyms
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years from 2005 to 2009 .
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, international Linking Words
student
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enrollment
witnessed an upward trend in the percentage of 3 countries but in Iran was the highest.
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with,
where
was a moderate growth in international Correct your spelling
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student
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enrollment
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rocketed
substantially at 40% . Correct pronoun usage
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international
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in international
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enrollment
from 90% to 120% . Iran county between 2005 and 2007 international Use synonyms
student
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enrollment
boomed substantially at 70% . After 2 years Use synonyms
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increase from 90% to 120% in 2009 .
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