The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013

The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013
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The illustrations provide data about how the Natural
History
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Museum
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history
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museum
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has changed over 3 years from 2010 to 2013.
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, it can be seen that in 2010, a natural
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museum
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had four different sections and a large green area,
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it had many more sections and no
garden
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in 2013. Looking at the details, it appears that there were only four separate sections in 2010, including mammals, ocean
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, dinosaur
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, and lobby.
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, a large
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is located on the right side of the Natural
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Museum history
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, providing a green area. In 2013, the Natural
History
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Museumhistory
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Museum history
museum
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witnessed many changes, the most important one being the knocking out of the
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. Looking more carefully, it can be seen that the mammal section has been relocated to the right side of the
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and replaced with the Ice Age exhibition. Another striking change is that a new section called insects has been added to the
museum
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, in the left corner of the ice age exhibition.
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,
instead
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of a
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, a new shop, cafe and human origins display was introduced to the
museum
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in 2013. The
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interesting thing is that the ocean
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and the dinosaur
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have been maintained in their places and have not witnessed any changes.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words history, museum, garden, hall with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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