The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
The given bar chart is a figure revealing data about the
percentage
of 11 to 16 years old
children
's journey to school, by 4 ways ( Walk, Bicycle, Car and Bus ) in the UK for 1 year.
Overall
,
while
most
children
walk for their journey for lower
miles
, in long distances they tend to
use
the Bus. Generally, the lowest rate is for using the car. As the chart shows, in 0-1
miles
, 90% of
children
prefer to walk,
whereas
just about 25% of them
use
this
way for 2-5
miles
.
Moreover
, in over 5
miles
, the highest
percentage
of students tend to
use
Bus, approximately 70%, and the lowest proportion of buses is for 0-1
miles
, at almost 3%.
Additionally
, car
use
is the lowest
percentage
of other way between
children
, as we see in all
miles
it just
use
about 10%, 20%, 30% and over 20%, respectively. In order to Bicycle, in 0-1 and 2-5, the
percentage
of
use
is almost similar, at about 50%.
Furthermore
, for over 5
miles
there is not any data in the walk.
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