The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
The given bar chart is a figure revealing data about the
percentage
of 11 to 16 years old children
's journey to school, by 4 ways ( Walk, Bicycle, Car and Bus ) in the UK for 1 year.
Overall
, while
most children
walk for their journey for lower miles
, in long distances they tend to use
the Bus. Generally, the lowest rate is for using the car.
As the chart shows, in 0-1 miles
, 90% of children
prefer to walk, whereas
just about 25% of them use
this
way for 2-5 miles
. Moreover
, in over 5 miles
, the highest percentage
of students tend to use
Bus, approximately 70%, and the lowest proportion of buses is for 0-1 miles
, at almost 3%.
Additionally
, car use
is the lowest percentage
of other way between children
, as we see in all miles
it just use
about 10%, 20%, 30% and over 20%, respectively. In order to Bicycle, in 0-1 and 2-5, the percentage
of use
is almost similar, at about 50%. Furthermore
, for over 5 miles
there is not any data in the walk.Submitted by pooya.olad on
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