The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
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The given bar chart is a figure revealing data about the
percentage
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of 11 to 16 years old
children
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's journey to school, by 4 ways ( Walk, Bicycle, Car and Bus ) in the UK for 1 year.
Overall
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,
while
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most
children
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walk for their journey for lower
miles
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, in long distances they tend to
use
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the Bus. Generally, the lowest rate is for using the car. As the chart shows, in 0-1
miles
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, 90% of
children
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prefer to walk,
whereas
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just about 25% of them
use
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this
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way for 2-5
miles
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.
Moreover
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, in over 5
miles
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, the highest
percentage
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of students tend to
use
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Bus, approximately 70%, and the lowest proportion of buses is for 0-1
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, at almost 3%.
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, car
use
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is the lowest
percentage
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of other way between
children
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, as we see in all
miles
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it just
use
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about 10%, 20%, 30% and over 20%, respectively. In order to Bicycle, in 0-1 and 2-5, the
percentage
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of
use
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is almost similar, at about 50%.
Furthermore
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, for over 5
miles
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there is not any data in the walk.
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