The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the expenses of the two countries based on consumer goods namely, cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras.

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, the cars have highest expenditure in both countries.

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, the camera showed a discernible trend from the rest with the highest in the

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and half of it in

France

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. The perfume is the least selling good in both the countries.

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with, the cars in the

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dominated among their peers with 4,50,000 pounds of expenditure

whereas

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, in

France

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, it has a 50,000 difference with a total of 4,00,000 pounds.

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, the computers, with 3,75,000 in

France

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and 3,50,000 in the

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, we have the books, the

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has more book readers than

France

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with 4,00,000 and 3,00,000 respectively. The perfume is the money-saving commodity in the list with 2,00,000 in

France

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and 1,49,000 in the

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respectively.

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, we have cameras which have more than 3,50,000 expenditure in the

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and 1,50,000 in

France

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