The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the usage of household cars in the UK between 1971 to 2007.
Overall
, It is noticeable that people without car
ownership had been reduced from slightly less than 50% up to half of it whereas
a
number of households with two or more cars had Change the article
the
been
increased.Unnecessary verb
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A
number of single-vehicle users remained at the same level throughout the years with mild fluctuations.
In detail,the proportion of people without cars was high in 1971 when compared to 2007, when the majority of the population owned at least one Correct article usage
The
car
. Double car
owners had been inclined up to the level approximately
Change preposition
of approximately
around
25% from the beginning value Rephrase
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less
than 10% with multiple plateaus during these years.Change preposition
of less
Also
,triplet owners follow the same pattern although
they had started with a tiny minority with so many steady periods they did not reach a tenth of the percentage.In conclusion, three quarter
of the population had at least a single Add a hyphen
three-quarter
car
in 2007 which was around a
half in 1971.Remove the article
apply
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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