The table and pie chart give information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie chart give information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate the proportion of multiple nationalities living in Australia and their preferred living locations.
Overall
, the ratio of Australians is the highest (73%) compared to other nationalities, and most residents choose the city as their residence area. A closer look at the pie chart shows only 1% of Australian residents are Dutch, followed by Chinese (2%) and New
Zealander
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(3%).
Additionally
, the percentage of UK citizens comprises 7% of the
overall
population,
while
the rest (14%) is from migrants from various other countries. As shown in the table, 80% of Australians choose to live in the city, and only 20% are located in the regional area. The rest of the 4 nationalities (UK, NZ, Chinese and Dutch)
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the same trend. To be specific, there are 89 % of British citizens, 90% of New
Zealander
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Zealanders
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, 99% of Chinese and 83% of Dutch live in the metro area.
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