The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given diagram compares information about the number of 3 various types of crime namely, Car
theft
, house burgling, and street robbery, and cases committed in periodic of 25 years per
million
in England and Wales.
overall
, car
theft
and house bungling had rapidly changed
,
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but had first and second levels
instead
of street robbers that
was
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were
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increasing.
According to
the line chart, at the beginning the figure for car
theft
were
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was
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400,000
then
this
trend rose significantly to a peak of 1.6
million
in 1995, yet
after
this
time the line declined to 1
million
in 2005 the same as in 1990. Not only Care
theft
but
also
house burgling altered speedily.
IN
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other words,
started
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at 0.2
million
in 1970;
furthermore
, that was growing up slightly to 0.7
million
between 1990 and 1995,
then
reduced to 0.5
million
in 2005.
Nevertheless
, street robbery was steadiness from 1970 to 1990.
In addition
, the trend climbed Marginally to 0.2
million
in 2000,
then
did not change untile2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words theft, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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