The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given diagram compares information about the number of 3 various types of crime namely, Car

theft

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, house burgling, and street robbery, and cases committed in periodic of 25 years per

million

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in England and Wales.

overall

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, car

theft

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and house bungling had rapidly changed

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but had first and second levels

instead

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of street robbers that

was

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were

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increasing.

According to

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the line chart, at the beginning the figure for car

theft

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were

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was

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400,000

then

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this

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trend rose significantly to a peak of 1.6

million

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in 1995, yet

after

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this

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time the line declined to 1

million

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in 2005 the same as in 1990. Not only Care

theft

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but

also

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house burgling altered speedily.

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other words,

started

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starting

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at 0.2

million

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in 1970;

furthermore

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, that was growing up slightly to 0.7

million

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between 1990 and 1995,

then

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reduced to 0.5

million

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in 2005.

Nevertheless

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, street robbery was steadiness from 1970 to 1990.

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, the trend climbed Marginally to 0.2

million

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in 2000,

then

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did not change untile2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words theft, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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11
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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