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The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart provides an overview of the number of
films
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 created by five distinct regions between 2007 and 2009.
Overall
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,
country
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 A produced the highest total number of movies among the five countries from 2007 to 2009,
while
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country
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 E recorded the lowest figure during
this
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 period. From 2007 to 2009, despite a decline in
movie
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production
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,
country
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 A consistently maintained the highest level of
production
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, with approximately 250
films
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 produced over the three years.
In contrast
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although
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country
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 B experienced an increase in the number of movies produced during
this
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 period, it still ranked second in
movie
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production
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, with a total of 170
films
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 produced. In
Country
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 C,
movie
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production
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 gradually rose over the years, from about 10
films
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 in 2007 to nearly 15 in 2008, and
finally
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 reaching roughly 20
films
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 in 2009. In comparison,
Country
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 D's
movie
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production
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 fluctuated, starting at approximately 15
films
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 in 2007, decreasing to 10 in 2008, and
then
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 rising back to 15 in 2009. Meanwhile,
Country
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 E's
movie
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production
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 was the lowest, with about 10
films
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 produced yearly.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, country, movie, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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