Technological development in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological development have brought? Do you agree or disagree

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These days,

technology

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has been developing too much, and

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trend won't be stopped, but will be evolving faster than today, and affecting enormously.

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, some people believe that

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in past had more alternatives for real people than now.

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, I take issue with

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idea, for currently, we cannot live without

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equipment

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past living;

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, these devices are regular tools, so we cannot sense. On the one hand, when we transfer to

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world without

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then

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we cannot survive in

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situation because

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is the main part of our life, yet the older generation can live really well in

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position in spite of

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technology

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having good influence in the way of living.

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, when we go to nature for 3 days without television after one day we are really tired

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of happy.

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, people

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lived 100 years ago when they watched TV liked it, but life without TV

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flowed.

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, our surroundings are full of

technology

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, and become regular, so we do not feel the effect of them is extremely high. To illustrate, we get up, call, and do our work with our cell phones

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, we control our house from the office by Internet, and another example.

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, we cannot understand the device's work, but when we do not have it,

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we understand it. In conclusion, with the reasons mentioned above, I think the effect of

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during

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is higher than past because following life without it is a big lack.

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Ensure that your main points are fully developed and supported with specific examples. This gives your argument more weight and clarity, ensuring your message is understood and impactful.

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Pay attention to the word choice and sentence structure, some sentences are unclear which affects the overall readability of the essay.

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You have provided an introduction and conclusion which frame your essay well.

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Your argument that technology's role is more pervasive now than in the past is clear and understandable.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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