Task 1 The line graph below shows spending on player transfers by four different English football teams from 1995 to 2005.
The line chart displays the amount of spending on player transfers for four football teams:
Manchester
City, Use synonyms
Manchester
Utd, Liverpool and Arsenal, in 20 years.
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Overall
, almost all of them showed upward trends, except for Arsenal, which slightly declined throughout Linking Words
given
period.
Correct article usage
the given
Manchester
Utd started its spending with about 35 Use synonyms
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
in 1995, and increased gradually, Use synonyms
over
90 Change preposition
to over
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
; Use synonyms
Linking Words
moreover
it has raised its spending dramatically up to 160 Add a comma
moreover,
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
in the Use synonyms
last
5 years. Linking Words
Likewise
, Liverpool has experienced similar trends, beginning Linking Words
from
about 30 Change preposition
with
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
and Use synonyms
then
reaching its peak at about 130 Linking Words
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
, in 2015.
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Manchester
City has increased slightly between 1995 and 2005, with 10 Use synonyms
millions
of Use synonyms
pounds
, respectively. Use synonyms
However
, it has surged up slightly during the Linking Words
last
decade, almost 10 times greater than in the first period (130 Linking Words
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
). Unlike other teams, Arsenal has decreased its spending on transfers with some Use synonyms
fluctustions
over the recorded period and the final amount was slightly lower by about 3 Correct your spelling
fluctuations
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words manchester, millions, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
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