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The two maps below show an island before, and after the construction of some tourist facilities, summarized the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The two maps below show an island before, and after the construction of some tourist facilities, summarized the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The maps below depict an
island
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, before and after some tourist amenities construction.
Overall
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,
while
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 the
island
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 was intact with no building, the maps exhibit some facilities, including a restaurant,
reception
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, accommodations, and access ways that have been added for visitors.
Moreover
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, a dock is placed for yachts. First of all a pillar is constructed on the south side of the
island
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 for the berthing of boats and a vehicle track connected it to the
reception
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. Where is the
reception
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 is in the centre of the buildings the vehicle track is continued All around it to offer access to other amenities.
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, a restaurant in the north of the
island
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 opposite, the pier.
Also
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, accommodations are built on the left and right side of the
reception
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 in the groves' area, and footpaths ease access among them.
Moreover
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, the food pass continued on the west of the
island
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 to the coast and its plague.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, reception with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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