In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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are educated by

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or guardians that they can get anything they want in life if they work hard enough.

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phenomenon can bring about some beneficial impacts, its negative implications are undeniable. Those who

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that

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should be encouraged to give it their best to achieve what they want in life may have several arguments. They may well argue that it gives

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motivation when they do any task that

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given. Indeed, evidence for

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can be seen in

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where

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are extremely competitive in academic factors or even general ones. Once they see that their friends have a higher score

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or a greater achievement in a

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competition, they will certainly try to beat those

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and with the mindset that

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given by their

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, they will try as hard as they

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, no matter

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final conclusion is, they will feel satisfied as they have given

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their best effort in something that they want. Another point worth mentioning is that

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kind of encouragement is attributable to

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confidence.

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psychological research,

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that

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who are mentally supported by

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tend to be more confident when performing at school and later on, at work.

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the fact that they believe in themselves more than others who are not mentally supported;

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, they might gain more achievement thanks to

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. Despite the aforementioned valid reasons,

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trend can still be disadvantageous. Specifically,

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advice might give

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unrealistic

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in life.

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might be because

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need to be well aware of what their real ability is in order to be successful in

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competitive society.

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, if a student has a gift for music, but

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wants to be the best in math

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her math score is always B or C;

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should guide her

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the right direction,

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and nurture

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her real talent by asking her to

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music

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career

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of being stubborn and keep studying math until it is too late to do over. In conclusion, telling

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that they can get anything they want as long as they try hard enough could bring some positive implications.

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, its detrimental effects are unavoidable.