The bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar graph changes in the
transports
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used to and from work in a particular European city for three years.
Overall
the chart indicates that car
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increased over the period shown,
where as
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use
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the use
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of
bus
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declined. The figures for tubes and trains both fluctuated over the same period of time. As
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, by far the greatest proportion of commuters used
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, at nearly 40%. The figures for other means of
transports
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- tube, car and train- were at around 27%, 22% and 19% respectively. Between 1960 and 2000, commuters using
bus
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fell in popularity as the figure fell to about 26% in 1980 and
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fell even
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to 15% in 2000.
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the use
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of
car
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increased significantly to about 23% in 1980, before pushing the figure to well above 35% towards the end of the period. To move to train, the figures increased to about 26%, but
this
fell to just over 20% by 2000. Use of
tube
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declined in 1980, in terms of
tube
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, there was
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downward trend in 1980, before rising to a quarter in the final year.
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