The bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar graph changes in the
transports
used to and from work in a particular European city for three years.
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
Overall
the chart indicates that car used
increased over the period shown, Wrong verb form
use
where as
Correct your spelling
whereas
use
of Correct article usage
the use
bus
declined. The figures for tubes and trains both fluctuated over the same period of time.
As Fix the agreement mistake
buses
regard
, by far the greatest proportion of commuters used Fix the agreement mistake
regards
bus
, at nearly 40%. The figures for other means of Correct article usage
the bus
transports
- tube, car and train- were at around 27%, 22% and 19% respectively.
Between 1960 and 2000, commuters using Fix the agreement mistake
transport
bus
fell in popularity as the figure fell to about 26% in 1980 and Fix the agreement mistake
buses
this
fell even further
to 15% in 2000. In contrast
, use
of Correct article usage
the use
car
increased significantly to about 23% in 1980, before pushing the figure to well above 35% towards the end of the period. To move to train, the figures increased to about 26%, but Fix the agreement mistake
cars
this
fell to just over 20% by 2000. Use of tube
declined in 1980, in terms of Fix the agreement mistake
tubes
tube
, there was Fix the agreement mistake
tubes
marked
downward trend in 1980, before rising to a quarter in the final year.Correct article usage
a marked
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