The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
honey
production process by honey
bees
, starting with the creation of a hive
and culminating in the production of honey
.
Initially
, worker bees
construct a hive
, which serves as a storage facility for the honey
. Following
this
, the bees
engage in pollination, transferring pollen between flowers, which leads to the production of nectar
. Nectar
, a combination of water and sugars
, is the essential ingredient for Fix the agreement mistake
sugar
honey
. After collecting nectar
from various flowers, the bees
transport it back to the hive
.
Once at the hive
, the nectar
is deposited into multiple cells by house bees
. These cells are then
subjected to a process called fanning, where air is introduced to facilitate aeration and fermentation. During this
stage, enzymes in the bees
' stomachs convert the nectar
into simple sugars, initiating the transformation into honey
. When the honey
achieves the desired consistency, house bees
seal the honeycombs with beeswax, ensuring the honey
is preserved.
The final stage involves harvesting the honey
from the hive
, after which it is processed and made available for consumer purchase. This
cyclical process highlights the intricate and collaborative efforts of honey
bees
in producing honey
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