The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The maps illustrate how an
island
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has changed following the development of various facilities for visitors.
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, there have been significant constructions
in
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the
island
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in terms of accommodation and facilities for tourists. It is noteworthy that these developments have occurred without any noticeable damage to the trees. The length of the
island
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is over 1200 metres
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its width varies from about 200 to 500 metres in different places. The only significant features before the constructions were a beach in the west and a few palm trees in the eastern and western halves, apart from which the
island
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was completely bare. The beach has now been equipped with swimming facilities, and the western woodland is surrounded by a series of huts which are connected to each other and to the beach via footpaths. There is
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a restaurant in the northern part which is connected to a reception building in the middle of the
island
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,
as well as
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a new pier to the south, by means of a vehicle track.
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, a
larger
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set of huts
have
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been constructed between the reception and the eastern woodland.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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