The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school

site in 2024.
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The maps below depict the
school
site
in 2004 and the plan for developments to the
site
of the
school
in 2024.
It is clear that
the educational and recreational facilities will be changed as a new building will be constructed,and a number of
car
parks will be built. As for green spaces, the trees in the northwest of the
school
site
will be cleared and a new
car
park 2 will be set up in
this
spot. The location of the
car
park 1 will not be changed. Considering the educational side, a third of the path between
school
buildings 1 and 2 was removed and two
the
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school
buildings will be connected together.
In addition
, the sports field in the north of the
school
site
was demolished and a new
school
building 3 will be developed there. With regard to recreational facilities, the sports field will be relocated to the west of the
school
site
.
Finally
, in the centre of the
site
, a number of trees were cleared and a new road will be constructed so as to the two
car
parks connected together.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, site, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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