The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.
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The maps illustrate how the
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that took place from 1967 to 2001 in a place called Felixstowe in the UK.
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, Felixstowe underwent a number of dramatic
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, the most important of which was the development of amenities catering for recreational needs and the disappearance of the fish market and pier. The north-west of the town saw a number of transformations, which stayed the same as the golf course. The shops in the middle of the map the shops left were upgraded into storeys buildings,
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the shops on the right are replaced by flats. A swimming pool, a hotel and tennis courts are built, replacing the farmland in the northeastern part of the area. The expansion of planted trees in the southeastern part of the town, in which no
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were made to the dunes. Wind turbines and a car park were built. No
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were found in the hotel and coffee. Meanwhile, the south-east of the town
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witnessed significant
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with the pier and marina being transformed into a public beach and the fish market becoming a private beach.
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