Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Domesticated

pets

have been living alongside humans for decades, with the most popular choice being cats and dogs.

However

, safety concerns are still raised as they are inherently

animals

.

Hence

, some

parents

are against keeping

pets

as they believe it can harm their

children

,

while

others would argue

otherwise

. Despite all the concerns, I believe keeping a domesticated pet is far better for

children

for some reasons stated below. A common argument against keeping

pets

is their unhealthy habits.

Pets

typically do not shower as often as humans do, so they can get themselves in every dirty corner of the house.

Also

, they often do not keep their saliva to themselves. Some

parents

argue that these behaviours may cause

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more vulnerable.

On the other hand

, I would argue that most

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domesticated

pets

are a part of the family;

consequently

, ensuring their health and sanitation should

also

fall under the

parents

' responsibility before letting them

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pets

.

For instance

, a dog will be vaccinated to avoid rabies diseases.

In addition

, many believe that

animals

can be dangerous when being kept so close to youngsters because their lack of human knowledge may cause accidental irreversible harm. A clear example of

this

is that a scratch from a cat can be lethal in

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certain circumstances, and most

parents

have not

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chance to prevent it previously. Yet, the fact is that some

pets

have done well in protecting their owner's

children

. There are many cases of them alerting humans in the face of danger, protecting

children

and adults alike. Take

this

case as an example, a baby who is going to fall from a sofa is protected by a cat who

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its body before the baby falls to the ground. Taking everything into consideration,

although

the harms that come from keeping a pet like health and safety are a cause for concern, it can be mitigated simply by caring for them more through

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vaccination and

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the

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positive

light as some

animals

can be

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a great help in protecting the owners.