The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

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joined different types of social activity hubs in Melbourne, Australia in the 2000 and 2020 timeframe.

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activeties

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active

participants numbers increased over the period,

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the opposite trend.

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, film activity remained dominant

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raking of other

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activities

activites

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activities

changed over the period The film activity audience was more than 65 in 2000 and it reached it is

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in 2020(with nearly 70)Even though experienced

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drop in mid-time.

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, martial arts underwent almost the same trend as film Hub but started with a lower amount around 37, and hit the record in 2010 (with around 40) The ping pong participants increased more than 3 times it started with 18 and slightly increased till 2010(with 20),

after

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dramatically grew and reached its' peak (with 55).

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Musical performances and amateur dramatics show vice versa trends. Musical performances began in 2005 and boomed till 2010 (with 10) and continued with a stable trend

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15(in 2020).

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Amateur dramatics

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the first five

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slightly increased almost

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30 (in 2005)

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flat dropping and reached 5 (in 2020)