The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides key information about aggregate carbon dioxide in four nations, over a period of 40 years. the units are measured
by
Change preposition
in
tonnes
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that (Portugal) was the lowest one in 1967, whereas
the United Kingdom
was the highest line. In addition
, Italy and Sweden are in the middle between the United Kingdom
and Portugal.
According to
what is shown, the United Kingdom
was decrease
over the years between nearly 11 Wrong verb form
decreased
tonnes
to 8.5 percent
. on the opposite, Portugal Change the spelling
per cent
was
rose dramatically to a peak of mostly 4.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
tonnes
in 2007. Although
, the United Correct word choice
However
Kingdom
overtook all the nations in 2007.
In terms of, Italy slightly grew on the same pattern and went from tonnes
to 7 tonnes
. However
, Sweden dropped over the years and in the end met with Portugal at relatively 4 tonnes
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