The chart illustrates the average time spent on manufacturing cars of 4 different brands in the US includes General Motor, Ford, Toyota, and Honda.

The chart illustrates the average time spent on manufacturing cars of 4 different brands in the US includes General Motor, Ford, Toyota, and Honda.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart illustrates the average time spent on manufacturing cars of 4 different brands in the US includes General Motor, Ford, Toyota, and Honda.
The chart illustrates how much time was spent on making
cars
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4 different brands including General
Motor
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Motors
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, Ford, Toyota, and Honda between 1998 and 2005.
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, there was a diminishment in the number of hours spent on producing
cars
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in 4 companies.
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, all the lines remained a similar rank after years, despite fluctuations. The range of time consumed on manufacturing
cars
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of General
Motor
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started at precisely 32 in 1998, after which it dropped significantly to 25 in 2002, before having a slight decline to 22 in 2005.
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, the figure for hours utilized for producing
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of Toyota was
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22 in 1998, followed by a marginal growth to roughly 24 in 2002, despite some fluctuations, and ending the whole period at precisely 20. About 28 hours were applied
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creating
cars
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in the Ford corporation in 1998, with a noticeable decline to approximately 25 in 2002 and experienced a gradual drop from the same year onwards, reaching the end of the period at 22.
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the time
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used
on
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inventing
cars
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of Honda began at 22 in 1998 and experienced a slight rise to just under 24 in 2002,
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some fluctuations, before witnessing a drop in the
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half of the years, reaching the final data at 20 in 2005.

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