The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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bar graph compares the regional rates of illiteracy between males and females, of six areas in the past year.
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, women have a higher percentage of illiteracy as compared to males, in all six regions ( South Asia, Arab states, Sub-Saharan Africa, East Asia, Latin America, and the developed countries).
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, in developed countries, most of the population is literate,
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in South Africa most of the citizens are illiterate. In every area category, the female population has a higher ratio of illiteracy,
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, in developed nations,
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is a mere 2%, and in the Caribbean and Oceania, it is under 20%.
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to, the other three where close to 50% of women do not have the skill to read and write.
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, men are more often literate worldwide, almost 99% of the population is literate in developed countries,
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these rates in Oceania and Latin America are about 90%. Similar to females, Arabic, Asian and African males have lower rates, as compared to the formerly mentioned areas, with about 65%-75% literacy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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