The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The
statistic
from the two tables Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
figures
the data of Fairtrade Verb problem
show
sales
in five distinct European areas including the United Kingdom, Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden which consist of two commodities (labelled coffee
and bananas) in the period between 1990 & 2004.
Overall
, the labelled coffee
sales
were dominated by Switzerland
in 1999. In contrast
, the UK’s labelled coffee
revenue
in 2004 surpassed Switzerland
’s by a significant increment. On the other hand
, Switzerland
dominated the fairtrade revenue
of Bananas in both years of 1999 & 2004.
It can be seen that the fair trade sales
of labelled coffee
from Switzerland
were the highest in 1999 at 3 million
euros, two times bigger than the UK in the same time period. However
, the UK’s revenue
surpassed Switzerland
’s by a remarkable increment to 20 million
against 6 million
. Other countries had a lower revenue
by less than 2 million
in the time given period, except Denmark’s in 2004. Moving to the banana sales
, it shows that Switzerland
had the highest figure in both years compared with other countries, 15 million
in 1999 and increased significantly to 47 in 2004. In 1999, the revenue
of bananas sales
from other countries was lower than 2 million
, some of them experienced an increasing trend of sales
in 2004 (Belgium with 4 & UK with 5.5), while
the others decreased.Submitted by muhammad.alfarasyi on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, switzerland, coffee, revenue, million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!