The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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the data of Fairtrade
sales
in five distinct European areas including the United Kingdom,
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden which consist of two commodities (labelled
coffee
and bananas) in the period between 1990 & 2004.
Overall
, the labelled
coffee
sales
were dominated by
Switzerland
in 1999.
In contrast
, the UK’s labelled
coffee
revenue
in 2004 surpassed
Switzerland
’s by a significant increment.
On the other hand
,
Switzerland
dominated the fairtrade
revenue
of Bananas in both years of 1999 & 2004. It can be seen that the fair trade
sales
of labelled
coffee
from
Switzerland
were the highest in 1999 at 3
million
euros, two times bigger than the UK in the same time period.
However
, the UK’s
revenue
surpassed
Switzerland
’s by a remarkable increment to 20
million
against 6
million
. Other countries had a lower
revenue
by less than 2
million
in the time given period, except Denmark’s in 2004. Moving to the banana
sales
, it shows that
Switzerland
had the highest figure in both years compared with other countries, 15
million
in 1999 and increased significantly to 47 in 2004. In 1999, the
revenue
of bananas
sales
from other countries was lower than 2
million
, some of them experienced an increasing trend of
sales
in 2004 (Belgium with 4 & UK with 5.5),
while
the others decreased.
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