The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart
give
information about Change the verb form
gives
Australia
employment type categorized by sex in the previous year. Correct your spelling
Australian
Overall
, there are more men
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male
employee
than Fix the agreement mistake
employees
the
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apply
women
working in Australia.
The domination of men
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male
employee
happened in most Fix the agreement mistake
employees
sector
except professionals and Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
clerical
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the clerical
sector
. On Those
two Correct your spelling
In those
sector
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sectors
women
being
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were
majority
number with 700.000 per 1.350.000 as professionals and 980.000 per 1.800.000 as Correct article usage
the majority
clericals
. Fix the agreement mistake
clerical
Then
, The
clerical Correct article usage
apply
women
identified
as Add a missing verb
were identified
most
category.With only those two Correct article usage
the most
sector
dominated by Change to a plural noun
sectors
women
, another category
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other categories
such
as manager, semi-professional, tradespeople, production and laborer sector
are dominated by Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
men
. The highest gap between gender showed in tradespeople
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the tradespeople
sector
, as the men
is
8 times more than the Change the verb form
are
women
. Moreover
, there are far more men
employed as managers, the numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
men
is
almost tripled Verb problem
has
women
with only 200.000 employee
. Change to a plural noun
employees
In contrast
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the laborer
laborer
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labourer
sector
only a
difference of 110.000 approximately.
In conclusion, the employment Add a missing verb
has a
sector
in Australia in previous
year is dominated by Add an article
the previous
men
in most sector
except clerical and professional.Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
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