The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The information from the charts shows four destinations of
UK
graduates and postgraduates in 2008 other than getting into full-time
work
.
Overall
, most of both
UK
graduate and postgraduate
students
went to
further
study in 2008, followed by part-time
work
and unemployment.
In contrast
, the least of
students
went to voluntary
work
after they graduated from college. It can be seen that almost 30
thousands
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UK
bachelors continued their
studis
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studies
studios
. Contrarily, 17,735
students
went to part-time
work
, 16,235 were unemployed, and 3,500 got into voluntary
work
. Moving on to the
UK
students
with master’s degrees, most of them got into
further
study by 2,725
students
, 2,535
students
went to part-time
work
, and unemployment comes in third place as
UK
postgraduate student’s destination after they received their degree.
Furthermore
, less than five hundred
students
went to voluntary
work
, and voluntary
work
was the least place chosen by both
UK
graduate and postgraduate
students
in 2008.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, work, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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