The bar chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 2025 and future projection in 2025

The bar chart below gives information about  southland's main exports in 2000, 2025 and future projection in 2025
It is shown in the bar chart for international
tourism
,
dairy
products
, and meat
products
as Southland's main exports in 2000, 2015 and 2025.
Overall
, international
tourism
has an increasing trend and
dairy
products
have a fluctuating
furthermore
meat
products
have a decreasing trend
also
international
tourism
will become the dominant industry.
However
,
dairy
products
will remain strong. In 2000, we can see international
tourism
was the greatest export compared to other exports with just over 8
billion
also
this
figure increased slightly in 2015 it reached almost 9
billion
although
international
tourism
is estimated that
will
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continue to grow in 2025 it will be earning around 10
billion
for the country. In 2000,
dairy
products
were around 7
billion
but since
then
it had a sharp increase in 2015 to 10
billion
however
experts predict that may be dropped slightly in 2025 to 9.5
billion
. Meat
products
are the third key industry in Southland, throughout the period it was the lowest export with 6
billion
in 2000
then
decreased slightly in 2015 with sales of around 5.5
billion
furthermore
it is expected that sales will continue to fall in the future.
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