The bar chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 2025 and future projection in 2025

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It is shown in the bar chart for international

tourism

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dairy

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products

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, and meat

products

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as Southland's main exports in 2000, 2015 and 2025.

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, international

tourism

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has an increasing trend and

dairy

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products

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have a fluctuating

furthermore

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meat

products

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have a decreasing trend

also

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international

tourism

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will become the dominant industry.

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dairy

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products

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will remain strong. In 2000, we can see international

tourism

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was the greatest export compared to other exports with just over 8

billion

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also

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this

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figure increased slightly in 2015 it reached almost 9

billion

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although

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international

tourism

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is estimated that

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continue to grow in 2025 it will be earning around 10

billion

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for the country. In 2000,

dairy

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products

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were around 7

billion

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but since

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it had a sharp increase in 2015 to 10

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experts predict that may be dropped slightly in 2025 to 9.5

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. Meat

products

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are the third key industry in Southland, throughout the period it was the lowest export with 6

billion

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in 2000

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decreased slightly in 2015 with sales of around 5.5

billion

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it is expected that sales will continue to fall in the future.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

192 words

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