Some people believe that governments should invest in space exploration, while others think that the money should be spent on more pressing issues on Earth. Discuss both views and provide your own opinion.

Certain individuals support the opinion of investing in the study of extraterrestrial places

however

others want to make the

Earth

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the only place that needs investment. Both viewpoints are significant to consider before allotting money to any project. In

this

essay, both ideas will be discussed to find reasons

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of ideas. From my perspective, the

Earth

needs more financial support to improve sustainability. On the one hand,

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space exploration needs exorbitant amounts of funds

to begin

projects.

Also

, it requires intensive training and education of the personnel which is the

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requirement

to enter

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the field. It is believed that in the foreseeable

future

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humans can construct colonies on the Moon or

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Mars.

In addition

, people could have ample resources

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these celestial bodies once all these plans succeed.

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,

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Mars seems to be the potential planet where life can exist and

human

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can live there

due to

traces of water and oxygen found there. In

this

way

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space exploration can support humanity which is struggling with the meagre resources on the

Earth

.

On the other hand

, the

Earth

which is presently inhabited by the human species requires attention

due to

some pressing environmental issues. To exemplify, the research on the topic of biofuels requires a lot of money.

Also

, it should be promoted

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government to replace

the

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fossil fuels to reduce

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dependency on

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. It can reduce greenhouse

gases emission

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gas emissions

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and the

overall

impact of global warming. If the authorities work on

this

agenda rather than doing other explorations

then

they might not need any other planet to start life from the beginning. The

earth

if taken care of properly is able to sustain life for millions of years. In conclusion, some people might be interested in finding resources outside the

Earth

due to

the curiosity of exploring an uncharted territory

although

the funding is limited to carry on

such

missions.

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Earth

also

needs investment in its health to cope with certain ecosystem problems. It is really crucial to evaluate the costs and the benefits of any funding prior to the decision of whether it should be done

on

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space or the

Earth

.