The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates a cyclic process by which discarded glass
materials are recycled.
Overall
, it is evident from the diagram that this
process comprises five stages, beginning at the recycle bin and ending in the moulding machine.
Initially
, used glass
bottles are collected from the recycle bins and delivered to the treatment plant. Then
, the glass
bottles are washed in an industrial washing machine and sterilised.
Moving ahead, these sterile products are crushed with the help of a hydraulic press. After which, they are subjected to high temperatures causing the crushed raw material to melt. Next,
the molten end product is transferred to a moulding machine that shapes it into a glass
bottle. This
concludes the recycling process. Later, these fresh products are then
packed and transported by trucks to several supermarkets. After their intended purpose, these glass
bottles end up in recycling bins waiting to be converted into usable products again.Submitted by Writing8
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