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9.The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

9.The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides information about the consumption of three types of fast food including hamburgers,
pizza
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 and fried chicken by Mauritius teenagers from 1985 to 2015.
Overall
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, hamburgers and fried checked had become the most popular fast- food by 2015, with the biggest increase in numbers eaten,
while
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pizza
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 which was the most widely eaten from the start, declined substantially in popularity. It can be seen that
pizza
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 was the most frequently consumed type of fast-food in 1985 but by 2015 it was the least consumed. Hamburgers and fried chicken were eaten only a few
times
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 a
year
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 in 1985,
however
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, in 2015 consumption of both had increased to around 60 to 70
times
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 per
year
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.
According to
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 the figures, hamburger consumption started low in 1985 and hit the highest point at 71
times
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 per
year
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 in 2015.
Likewise
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, fried chicken started low and experienced a significant increase by 2005 at 60
times
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 per
year
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,
nevertheless
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, after that slightly increased again by 2015.
On the other hand
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,
pizza
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 was the highest consumed by Mauritian adolescents at around 60
times
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 per
year
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 in 1985 but declined substantially to 10
times
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 per
year
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 by 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, times, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "substantially" was used 2 times.
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