The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
people
who travel by
bicycle
and
car
to go to
work
.
Overall
, every
people
have their
reasons
why they choose to use a
bicycle
or
car
to go to
work
, there are many
reasons
that
people
choose both. Health and fitness and less pollution were the highest
reasons
why
people
chose a
bicycle
to go to
work
,
while
people
were more comfortable using a
car
to go to the office. In detail, the highest reason why
people
choose bicycles because of health and environmental
reasons
due to
healthiness and less pollution, they contributed around 30%,
besides
that, there are three other
reasons
why
people
choose bicycles which were no parking problems, no costs, and faster than driving, they contributed about 15%.
Conversely
, the highest reason
people
use the
car
to go to
work
is because of comfort, it is around 40%, followed by the distance to
work
approximately 21%.
Additionally
, the other
reasons
are faster than a
bicycle
, the need to carry things to
work
and more safety than the
bicycle
, it was just under 15% respectively
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