Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The
given
bar chart indicates the world Verb problem
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pineapple
exports for the top three countries that produced this
fruit in 2009 and 2019, and the pie chart shows the cost of each pineapple
for the customer.
It is clear that
the
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country
A had the biggest production in 2019, while
the
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country
B had this
position in 2019.
Distribution and retail included the greatest part of the cost for each pineapple
in 2019.
In 2009, country
B harvested the biggest amount of pineapple
more than 4 metric tonnes, while
country
A had just about 1 metric tonne production, and the figures for country
C were negligible. Meanwhile, country
A produced a huge rate of this
fruit which was almost 10 metric tonnes, while
country
B just gave about 1.5 metric tonnes of pineapple
to the global market.
The pie chart shows that 35% of the expenditure of each pineapple
was for distribution and retail in 2019. In addition
, profit and taxes had 18% and 16% of expenditure for the customer, respectively.
The amount of money which the consumer expended on import licences and international transport for each pineapple
was about 11 per cent, while
the proportions for export costs and profit was almost 4%.Submitted by tina83at on
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