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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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 given charts compare the proportion of
water
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 which is used in different parts of the world.
It is clear that
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 the biggest amount of
water
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 was used for agriculture by
Africa
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, South
America
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, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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,
while
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 the
water
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 usage for the industrial part had the biggest portion in Europe and North
America
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.
To begin
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 with, the
water
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 consumed for agriculture in
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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 was around 80 per cent, but,
this
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 figure for South
America
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 was 71%. Domestic use in South
America
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 included 19%, yet, it was 7% in Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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 and 9% in
Africa
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.
In addition
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, the rate of
water
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 consumed in South East
Asia
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 and South
America
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 was about 10%, and these figures were about 5 per cent in
Africa
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 and Central
Asia
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.
On the other hand
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, Europe and North
America
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 used 53% and 48% of their
water
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 resources in the industrial zone. Meanwhile, the percentages of
water
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 applied in agriculture were 325 and 39% in Europe and North
America
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,
in contrast
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, these two sections utilise around 13 per cent of
water
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 in the domestic areas.

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