The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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What has been depicted in the line graph is the change in average carbon
emissions
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each person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, CO2
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in the UK and
Sweden
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ranked
first
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for the
first
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decade, though the latter saw a dramatic decrease and came in third place in the end.
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, per-capita carbon
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in Italy and Portugal followed an upward trend over the given period. At
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first
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, CO2
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in the United Kingdom started at around 11 metric
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, after which it experienced a slight drop and reached the initial value of
Sweden
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in 2007. After declining from 10 in 1977 to nearly 7 metric
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in 2007, average CO2 emission in
Sweden
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saw a moderate increase over the
first
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decade. In the beginning, the amount of CO2
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in Italy began at 4 metric
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and rose slightly until 1997, when it overtook
Sweden
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and continued increasingly (8 metric
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) the next 30 years.
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, the figure for Portugal
initially
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rose gradually from 1 to around 5 metric
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in 1997
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and
then
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remained unchanged for the rest of the year.
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