The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
What has been depicted in the line graph is the change in average carbon
emissions
each person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, CO2
emissions
in the UK and
Sweden
ranked
first
for the
first
decade, though the latter saw a dramatic decrease and came in third place in the end.
Additionally
, per-capita carbon
emissions
in Italy and Portugal followed an upward trend over the given period. At
first
, CO2
emissions
in the United Kingdom started at around 11 metric
tonnes
, after which it experienced a slight drop and reached the initial value of
Sweden
in 2007. After declining from 10 in 1977 to nearly 7 metric
tonnes
in 2007, average CO2 emission in
Sweden
saw a moderate increase over the
first
decade. In the beginning, the amount of CO2
emissions
in Italy began at 4 metric
tonnes
and rose slightly until 1997, when it overtook
Sweden
and continued increasingly (8 metric
tonnes
) the next 30 years.
Moreover
, the figure for Portugal
initially
rose gradually from 1 to around 5 metric
tonnes
in 1997
,
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and
then
remained unchanged for the rest of the year.
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