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The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future devolopment of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make camparisons where relevant.

The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future devolopment of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make camparisons where relevant.
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The given maps
are illustrating
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illustrate
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 the Norbition
town
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town's
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currently
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current
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contruction
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construction
 and future scheduled
impovments
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improvements
.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from
largely
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a largely
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indnustrial
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industrial
area
 to
mainly
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a mainly
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 residential
area
.
In
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On
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 the north side of the present industrial
area
 is located a river. On the opposite side of the spotted
a
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apply
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farmland. A
roadaround
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is
which placed
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located
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 in the middle of the
town
 surrounded by many factories.
Reagarding
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Regarding
, the future
contruction
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construction
 of
town
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the town
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 provides more accommodation areas.
In
addition
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addition,
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 there will be many facilities for residents, including shops and
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a madical
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madical
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medical
 centre which will be built west and east sides of the road around. Twords, the right side of the roadaround, between living areas will be placed a playground, near the houses will be located a school. The farmland which was located on the north of the river
,
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 will be moved to the
sount
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sound
count
. A new residential
area
 will
be build
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be built
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inplace
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in place
 of the Farmland. From the new residential
area
 will be
availble
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available
 to across the river to get
in to
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into
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 the centre of the
town
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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