The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future devolopment of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make camparisons where relevant.

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are illustrating

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illustrate

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the Norbition

town

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town's

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currently

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current

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contruction

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construction

and future scheduled

impovments

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improvements

Overall

, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from

largely

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a largely

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indnustrial

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industrial

area

mainly

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a mainly

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residential

area

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the north side of the present industrial

area

is located a river. On the opposite side of the spotted

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apply

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farmland. A

roadaround

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which placed

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located

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in the middle of the

town

surrounded by many factories.

Reagarding

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Regarding

, the future

contruction

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construction

town

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the town

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provides more accommodation areas.

addition

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addition,

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there will be many facilities for residents, including shops and

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a madical

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madical

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medical

centre which will be built west and east sides of the road around. Twords, the right side of the roadaround, between living areas will be placed a playground, near the houses will be located a school. The farmland which was located on the north of the river

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will be moved to the

sount

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sound

count

. A new residential

area

will

be build

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be built

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inplace

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in place

of the Farmland. From the new residential

area

will be

availble

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available

to across the river to get

in to

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into

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the centre of the

town

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
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3 paragraphs

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