You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The illustrated bar graph depicts the volume of
illitracy
in Correct your spelling
illiteracy
last
region as per region and gender.
Change the article
the last
Overall
, it can be observed that females in all regions have the most illitracy
Correct your spelling
illiteracy
literacy
rate
while
comparing it with the
male counterparts in the Change the word
their
last
year.
It can be observed the illitracy
rates were on a Correct your spelling
illiteracy
literacy
step
riseCorrect your spelling
steep
,
when moving left to right on a globe. To start with, developed countries Remove the comma
apply
has
the least uneducated people with lessCorrect subject-verb agreement
have
5
%. Change preposition
than 5
However
, the illitracy
Correct your spelling
illiteracy
literacy
rates
steep incline can be observed Change noun form
rate's
while
moving towards the southern asia
having the most Change the capitalization
Asia
illitracy
Correct your spelling
illiteracy
rate
. Furthermore
, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Asia
rates were near and over 50% respectively. Contarary
to that, Latin America and East Correct your spelling
Contrary
Asia
have the average illitracy
Correct your spelling
illiteracy
literacy
rate
while
Correct word choice
when
comparting
it Correct your spelling
comparing
the
rest of Change preposition
to the
countries
.
Correct article usage
the countries
On the other hand
, while
comparing both gender
, Change to a plural noun
genders
female
had the most Fix the agreement mistake
females
illitracy
Correct your spelling
illiteracy
rate
. However
, only Latin America were
Change the verb form
was
to
found Fix the infinitive
apply
be
where female Unnecessary verb
apply
counterpart
had almost similar Fix the agreement mistake
counterparts
rate
. Fix the agreement mistake
rates
Female
reached the max Fix the agreement mistake
Females
rate
of illitracy
at over 50% similar to men with over 30% Correct your spelling
illiteracy
illitracy
in southern Correct your spelling
illiteracy
asia
.Change the capitalization
Asia
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words illitracy, rate, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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