You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The illustrated bar graph depicts the volume of
illitracy
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illiteracy
in
last
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region as per region and gender.
Overall
, it can be observed that females in all regions have the most
illitracy
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illiteracy
literacy
rate
while
comparing it with
the
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their
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male counterparts in the
last
year. It can be observed the
illitracy
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illiteracy
literacy
rates were on a
step
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steep
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rise
,
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when moving left to right on a globe. To start with, developed countries
has
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have
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the least uneducated people with less
5
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than 5
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%.
However
, the
illitracy
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illiteracy
literacy
rates
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rate's
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steep incline can be observed
while
moving towards the southern
asia
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Asia
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having the most
illitracy
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illiteracy
rate
.
Furthermore
, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
rates were near and over 50% respectively.
Contarary
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Contrary
to that, Latin America and East
Asia
have the average
illitracy
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illiteracy
literacy
rate
while
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when
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comparting
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comparing
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it
the
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to the
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rest of
countries
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the countries
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.
On the other hand
,
while
comparing both
gender
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genders
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,
female
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females
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had the most
illitracy
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illiteracy
rate
.
However
, only Latin America
were
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to
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found
be
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where female
counterpart
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counterparts
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had almost similar
rate
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rates
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.
Female
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Females
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reached the max
rate
of
illitracy
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illiteracy
at over 50% similar to men with over 30%
illitracy
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illiteracy
in southern
asia
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Asia
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words illitracy, rate, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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