Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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controversy

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era, financial support is essential for

low income

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low-income

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countries.Which may uplift

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the world.

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advanced nations are giving funds to economically challenged nations.

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,

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has not compromised the issue of destitution in

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countries and they need alternative methods.I strongly agree with

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statement.

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reason

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for

agreement

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in detail,

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a relevant conclusion. On the one hand,poverty is a big challenge

of

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the country, there is no point in

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monetary assistance alone, first of

all

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they should understand the

need

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of the people. Mainly ,they should provide

food

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for the communities.

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,when deprivation

was occurred

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in

pakistan

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,the

peoples

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people

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were struggled

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struggled

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for

food

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and many

death

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deaths

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have

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occurred ,other provinces helped them by

distribute

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food

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.which

help

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them to live .

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Moreover

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they should provide sanitary napkins for

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women

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, which is urgent for them to use during their periods.

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they must provide medicines for people

especially

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for patients.

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,a good job helps

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people to solve financial

crisis

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kingdom

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give job opportunities for them.

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increases the income of their country,

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therefore

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,they can save their territory.

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, Foreign money is the the main income

of

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the

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India,

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that they handle their difficulties. In conclusion,many countries go through the hardships.The whole globe supported them financially.which encourages them to reach

highest

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the highest

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level.

during

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this

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period,

for

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food

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and water have

significant

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role in

humans

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life.I strongly agree with

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statement.