Some people believe travelling in cars is good in cities while others argue bicycles are good while travelling in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Travelling is
one
of the undeniable activities in all Use synonyms
people
’s life, especially those who are living Use synonyms
urban
areas are willing to Change preposition
in urban
use
private vehicles, whilst fewer of them are debating Use synonyms
to
Change the verb form
using
use
Use synonyms
bicycle
is Correct article usage
a bicycle
one
of the good Use synonyms
thing
for travelling in Change to a plural noun
things
cities
Use synonyms
instead
of using Linking Words
cars
. Use synonyms
This
statement is going to discuss Linking Words
about
both Remove the preposition
apply
the
views of Correct article usage
apply
this
statement.
On the Linking Words
one
hand, nowadays most Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
like to migrate Use synonyms
in
urban areasChange preposition
to
,
because there Remove the comma
apply
is
more job facilities Change the verb form
are
are
available Unnecessary verb
apply
also
most basic amenities Linking Words
such
as education, Linking Words
hospitals
are situated in urban areas. Correct word choice
and hospitals
Thus
, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
giving
more prior to Wrong verb form
give
stay
there. Wrong verb form
staying
Moreover
, most of them are using Linking Words
cars
to Use synonyms
travel
, because Use synonyms
car
can only Add an article
the car
a car
possible
to Correct word choice
apply
travel
some places inside the city Use synonyms
also
it takes Linking Words
few
time only to reach the destination. To illustrate, my country Mumbai is Correct quantifier usage
apply
one
of the biggest Use synonyms
city
, Fix the agreement mistake
cities
there
Correct your spelling
where
are
most Unnecessary verb
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
Use synonyms
using
Wrong verb form
use
cars
because they are working outside of the city and there they can’t Use synonyms
use
other transport because it takes Use synonyms
much
time to reach their destination Fix the agreement mistake
apply
also
public Linking Words
transports
have more crowd during the peak hours. Fix the agreement mistake
transport
Hence
, they are choosing Linking Words
cars
to Use synonyms
travel
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
one
side of them are suggesting using Change preposition
on one
bicycles
to Use synonyms
travel
inside the Use synonyms
cities
are Use synonyms
giving
beneficial to all. Verb problem
apply
However
, Linking Words
bicycle
is Add an article
the bicycle
a bicycle
best
mode Change the article
the best
for
transportation, the person who Change preposition
of
are using
Wrong verb form
use
bicycles
their health will improve Use synonyms
also
there no air pollution. Linking Words
Additionally
, using Linking Words
bicycles
to avoid Use synonyms
the
traffic congestion in Correct article usage
apply
cities
during peak hours.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, from my perspective, using Linking Words
bicycles
for travelling is Use synonyms
best
option in Change the article
the best
cities
, simultaneously, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
people
who want to Change preposition
for people
travel
long Use synonyms
distance
that time car is the best option. Fix the agreement mistake
distances
Hence
, Linking Words
people
should change their attitude Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
about traveling
travel
Use synonyms
under
short Change preposition
apply
distance
they must Fix the agreement mistake
distances
use
Use synonyms
bicycle
.Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
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