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The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide key data about world
forests
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 in five different nations: South
America
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,
Africa
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, Asia, Europe, and North
America
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. All the units are measured by
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percent
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per cent
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Overall
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, it is clear from the charts that North
America
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 has the biggest pie in the two graphs.
In addition
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,
Africa
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 has several
forests
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 but there is no
timber
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,
whereas
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 Asia doesn't have a variety of
forests
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, but it has huge sources of
timbers
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timber
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According to
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 what is shown, North
America
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 has the highest
timber
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 sources at mostly 30
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percent
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per cent
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.
However
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,
Africa
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 has the lowest amount of
timber
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 at nearly 9
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percent
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per cent
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although
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, it has
forests
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 at 27
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percent
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per cent
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. In terms of
the
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apply
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South
America
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, it has
forests
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 at 16
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percent
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per cent
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 with 23
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percent
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per cent
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 of
timber
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 and it is the second city that has
timber
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 after North
America
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 at 30
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percent
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per cent
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.
Moreover
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, Europe has 27
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percent
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per cent
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forests
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of forests
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 with
high
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the high
a high
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 resource of
timber
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reach to
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reaching
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 20
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percent
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per cent
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.
In contrast
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,
Africa
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 has
forests
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 at 27%
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percent
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per cent
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 with a lack of
timber
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words forests, america, africa, percent, timber with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • afforestation
  • biodiversity
  • conservation
  • sustainable
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sequestration
  • land use
  • temperate
  • tropical
  • subtropical
  • arid
  • degradation
  • reforestation
  • habitat
  • old-growth
  • primary forest
  • secondary forest
  • logging
  • environmental policy
  • climate mitigation
  • carbon footprint
  • flora and fauna
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