Air travel is cheap these days, allowing ordinary people to travel further. Some people say that air fare should be increased because this leads to environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays all countries
flight
travelling cost is less price because Add an article
the airport
airport
Fix the agreement mistake
airports
was
located Wrong verb form
are
many
cities Change preposition
in many
also
many private aircrafts
Correct your spelling
aircraft
were
introduced for domestic Wrong verb form
have been
travel
. Thus
, the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who came from middle
class and below can able to Add an article
the middle
travel
in
plane easily. Other Change preposition
by
people
thinking
Wrong verb form
think
this
can create environmental implications and throng
crisis.
Correct article usage
a throng
Firstly
, this
globalization most of
countries Change preposition
apply
people
want to migrate frequently from one place to another for their job or some personal reasons. So that they can choose air
service because other transport such
as private vehicles, trains
should take Correct word choice
and trains
much
time to reach their destination but Fix the agreement mistake
apply
flight
can reach earlier to their citiesFix the agreement mistake
flights
.
Rephrase
earlier.
Secondly
, there were numerous aircraft introduced to travel
domestic
Change preposition
to domestic
destination
. Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
For instance
, my
home country there were various Change preposition
in my
flight
services introduced among the people
like indigo
, spicejet, Capitalize word
Indigo
Correct word choice
and deccan
deccan
. Each of Change the capitalization
Deccan
this
Correct determiner usage
these
flight
service companies are giving ticket fare
with high Fix the agreement mistake
fares
discount
for the person who Fix the agreement mistake
discounts
want
to Change the verb form
wants
travel
domestic
destinations. Change preposition
to domestic
Thus
, most of the people
in my country who has
come from Correct subject-verb agreement
have
middle class
Add a hyphen
middle-class
family they
will get more Replace the word
families
beneficial
.
Replace the word
benefits
Although
fewer people
who
are coming from Correct pronoun usage
apply
upper
middle class. They Add an article
the upper
are perceiving
Wrong verb form
perceive
this
low fare
ticket price for air
commuting is
not good for all Correct your spelling
as
it
might create more environmental hazards and Correct word choice
because it
crisis
. Fix the agreement mistake
crises
For
instance
if most of the Add a comma
instance,
people
are travelling through air craft
means there will be more chances Correct your spelling
aircraft
to create
Change preposition
of creating
an
Remove the article
apply
air
pollution also
the flight
services will goes
to Change the verb form
go
worse
level because of cheap and Correct article usage
a worse
fare
tickets.
Finally
, as per
my Change preposition
from
perspective
the low Add a comma
perspective,
fare
cost of flight
travel
is entirely
good plan. Add an article
an entirely
Thus
, of this
Correct determiner usage
these
activities
many are getting much beneficial. The Add a comma
activities,
flight
services will get from the ordinary people
till
elite Change preposition
to
people
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