Some people think the government should spend more money on sport facilities for top athletes. Other people think the government should spend more money on sport facilities for everybody. Discuss both views

Nowadays, gyms are becoming an essential thing to contain a quality

life style

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. So, some people think that the country must put a huge budget for public gyms,

while

others believe that the money should only be for

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gyms. On the one hand, using

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government dollars to improve the top players would be a great investment for the whole country and its people.

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, building a supportive working out area for only experienced bodybuilders is going to encourage them to improve and participate in global

competations

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competitions

competition

which will play an important part

to

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the

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and Make those athletes appear as

a role models

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for the whole citizens.

On the other hand

, the public

need

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a good facility to exercise in and have a chance to take care of their bodies in a good place. To illustrate, they have a busy daily routine where they spend most of their time sitting down on their desktops, With

that long hours

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of

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unactive

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inactive

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situation they must have a

well-structered

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well-structured

exercising

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area

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provided

from

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the government.

Additionally

, they face a huge amount of

strugles

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struggles

each day

especially

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with the fast-paced working life we are

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in today. They need a way to control

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stress and

anxiaty

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anxiety

.

For instance

, if the employee had a long and

stressed

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stressful

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day in his job and didn’t have the chance to free that stress he won’t work

good

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well

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the next day and that will lead to lower his productivity and mental health. That proves clearly that a person will

product

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more when he or she has a healthy lifestyle that the country can help with.

To sum up

, after a careful analysis of both perspectives. I believe that the

governent

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government

should

firstly

provide

a good places

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a good place

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to help everyone to work out. and

then

take care

to

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of

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the high-level players. Since the public

need

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needs

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more

phyisical improvments

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physical improvements

than anybody else.