A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum.” Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
this
letter to show my interest in
voluntering
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volunteering
for your
museum
as I am a student of
architecture
and it would be a great learning experience for me to work in the
museum
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Museum
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of
urban planning
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Urban Planning
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and
architecture
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Architecture
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of India. Since
,
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apply
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I am a
fourth year
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student of
architecture
and have already studied history in my second year, I can be a great fit for the role of a guide because I will be able to explain
people
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about
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the rich history of our temple
architecture
which is the main focus of
this
museum
. I can even bring my model of Meenakshi Temple which I made as part of my history project. I will be able to provide my services during weekdays in the evening,
5
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pm to 9pm and on weekends all day
through
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though
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as I have off from college on
saturdays
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and
sundays
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. I hope you will consider my request and allow me to be part of
this
great
museum
. Thanking you Yours sincerely, Bindiya Gupta
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coherence cohesion
You could break the content into more distinct paragraphs to improve readability. For example, start a new paragraph for the timings you're available.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
task achievement
You provided a complete response to the prompts by including your reason for wanting to volunteer, relevant skills, and availability.
task achievement
The letter is clear, with good use of formal language suitable for a letter to a museum director.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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