The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The column chart illustrates how often American people ate in fast-
food
restaurants over a period of 10 years.
Overall
, the highest percentage of
Americans
have eaten fast
food
once a week or at least once or twice a month.
However
, only a few proportion of them have eaten in fast
food
restaurants every day.
To begin
with, less than 5% of
Americans
decided to eat fast
food
every day over the entire period.
Similarly
, the
figure
for
Americans
who never tried fast
food
was low at 5%, 4% and 4% in 2003, 2006 and 2013 respectively.
Moreover
, the highest percentage of the US population ate fast
food
once a week and once or twice a month and their
figure
fluctuated between 25% and 33% over the entire 10 years.
In addition
, the
figure
for the American people who enjoyed eating fast
food
in restaurants several times a week was 17% in 2003,
whereas
,
this
figure
rose to 20% in 2006, after which, it saw a rapid decline to just over 15% in 2013.
Besides
, 13% of
Americans
ate fast
food
a few times a year in 2003,
nevertheless
, the proportion of them was equal to 15% in 2006 and 2013.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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