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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided tables illustrate data regarding the numbers of
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students
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 between European
universities
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 and
Australian
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universities
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 from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the total quantity of
exchange
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students
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 from colleges in Europe to
Australia
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 experienced an upward trend,
while
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 the
students
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 exchanging from
Australian
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universities
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 to Europe remained relatively stable. Noticeably, the
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 from
France
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 to
Australia
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 exceeded far beyond the other European countries. Looking at the first table in more detail, we can observe that the total
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 rose from 189 in 2007 to 226 in 2009. To be more specific, in 2007 there were 61
students
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 from
France
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 deciding to
exchange
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 in
Australian
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universities
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, which was two times higher than that of the United Kingdom. Over the following two years, the
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 from
France
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 to
Australia
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 dropped slightly by 1,
whereas
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 the counterpart for the United Kingdom
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 declined by 5. The remaining nations Sweden and Germany witnessed significant growth, with the figure elevating to 42 and 62 respectively. Regarding the Netherlands, the quantity of
exchange
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students
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 remained at 36 for two years.
According to
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 the second diagram, the total
number
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 of
students
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 who went from
Australia
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 to Europe remained at 152 between 2007 and 2009.
In contrast
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, in 2007, the quantities of
exchange
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students
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 from
Australian
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universities
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 to these five countries were below 40. And the nation with the fewest
exchange
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students
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 was Germany, with the figure reaching 18.
Furthermore
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,
France
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, which ranked first among the five nations, saw an apparent increment to 58, followed by 27 for Sweden, 26 for Germany, 23 for the United Kingdom, and 18 for the Netherlands.You should spend about 20 minutes on
this
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exchange, students, universities, australian, australia, number, france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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