The charts below show the percentages of male and female students of different age groups who studied in Australia for full-time and part-time training in 2006.
The bar chart compares the proportion of male and female students of numerous
ages
who studied in Australia for full-time and part-time training in 2006.
Overall
, The highest percentages of males and females were in part-time education
at ages
20-24.
The males between the ages
15 to 19 studied part-time learning more , at 12% than full-time education
, at 8%. The highest percentage
rates of part-time training were between ages
20-24 at 40% and full-time learning was 12%. While
the percentages of part-time education
were the same with 8% between ages
25-29 and 30+, the proportion of full-time was 6% and 10% respectively. The percentage
of females among 15-19 years in part-time education
was 17% and full-time learning was 7%. The highest percentage
rates of part-time studying were between ages
20-24 at 42% and full-time was about 13%. The proportion of females between ages
25-29 was the same , at 8%. While
the percentage
of part-time education
was, at 6%, the full-time was twice as much in ages
30+.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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