The map below shows the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments.

The map below shows the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments.
The maps depict the
centre
of a city named Islip and show how it is planned to develop it.
Overall
, the city
centre
is going to undergo some major changes
such
as developing a dual carriageway and numerous amenities and houses.
To begin
with, a dual carriageway will be developed around the city
centre
and the main road is going to be usable for pedestrians only,
moreover
, the shops on the north side of it will be destroyed to make way for other facilities like the bus station, a large shopping
centre
, car park and new housing.
However
, the shops on the south side of the road will remain there. Considering residential areas, new housing will be constructed near the park and added to other housing. It is worth noting that, the park is going to be rebuilt to reduce its size,
in addition
, the location of the school will not be changed.
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