The map below shows the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments.

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The maps depict the

centre

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of a city named Islip and show how it is planned to develop it.

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, the city

centre

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is going to undergo some major changes

such

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as developing a dual carriageway and numerous amenities and houses.

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with, a dual carriageway will be developed around the city

centre

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and the main road is going to be usable for pedestrians only,

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, the shops on the north side of it will be destroyed to make way for other facilities like the bus station, a large shopping

centre

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, car park and new housing.

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, the shops on the south side of the road will remain there. Considering residential areas, new housing will be constructed near the park and added to other housing. It is worth noting that, the park is going to be rebuilt to reduce its size,

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, the location of the school will not be changed.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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The map below shows the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developments.

In schools and universities, girl tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose science subjects. What is the reason? Should the trend be changed?

Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

Nowadays some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Personal experiences in leadership roles, facilitating changes, and mentoring others.