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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided charts illustrate the information about
water
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 consumption within six locations around the world, in percentages.
Overall
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, what stands out from the pie charts is that
water
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 is predominantly consumed in the agriculture sector in
Asia
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, South
America
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 and Africa, whilst in North
America
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 and Europe in industry. A significant amount of
water
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 is used in African, Central Asian, South East Asian and South American countries, with numbers 84, 88, 81 and 71 per cent respectively.
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, domestic usage' statistics stood at 7% for
Asia
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,
whereas
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 Africa and South
America
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 accounted for 9% and 19%.
Subsequently
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, manufacturing needs were covered by 7% and 5% of
water
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 supply shares in Africa and Central
Asia
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,
while
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 levels of 12% and 19% were indicated in Southeast
Asia
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 and South
America
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. Europe's industrial sector made up 53% which was slightly higher than North
America
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, representing 48% of the total amount.
On the other hand
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, the latter used more sources in land fields for 7 portions, having 39%.
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, the local use of
water
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 was almost the same for both areas, with numbers around 14% on average.

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