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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided table illustrates data regarding the income of secondary
school
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teachers
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 in five distinct nations in the year 2009.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the salaries of high
school
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teachers
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 experience an upward trend with the working time increasing. Noticeably, the wages of secondary
school
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teachers
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 in
Luxembourg
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 exceed far beyond those of the other four countries. Looking at the table in more detail, in the beginning,
Luxembourg
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 provides their high
school
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teachers
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 with the highest salaries, with it being 80000
dollars
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, which is nearly twice more than that of
Japan
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 and
Korea
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. After 15
years
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, the income that
teachers
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 in
Luxembourg
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 obtain dramatically increases by 39000
dollars
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 ,
whereas
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 the counterparts for
Japan
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 and
Korea
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 go up by 31000 and 18000 respectively.
Furthermore
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, Australia and Denmark witness modest growth, with the wages of secondary
school
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teachers
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 elevating to 48000 and 54000
dollars
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 15
years
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 later.
According to
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 the diagram,
teachers
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 in
Luxembourg
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 need to take 30
years
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 to reach their maximum salaries (132000
dollars
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), which was 7
years
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 and 4
years
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 fewer than those of
Japan
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 and
Korea
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.
In contrast
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, 86000
dollars
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 of wages are allocated to the high
school
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teachers
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 in
Japan
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, followed by 62000 in
Korea
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.
Moreover
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,
teachers
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 in Australia and Denmark only take
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time below 10
years
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 to realize the maximum figure of their income, with them being 48000 and 54000
dollars
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 respectively.
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